Teacher feedback about our rough cut

So after watching our rough cut our teacher gave us a few points on how to improve our video and also told us what was perfect with the video.

What to change

Some of the shots - we need to have more of the artist singing / rapping 

Cut in more of the shots as some of the shots are way too long e.g. the close up the eyes

Cut to the beat more often as there is not enough of it 

Some of the shots include things in the background such as people - so try to remove these 

What to keep

The shot which show the personality of the act 

The shots of the shoes 

The overall base tracks 

The first 15 / 20 seconds of the video